First Pics

random1283 · 6th May 2012, 6:57 PM

Hi all, I'm always looking at everyone else galleries so I thought I would post some pics of my own. Critic please I want to make my photography better.
1.

Cabarita Stairs by SmugCorporation, on Flickr
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Pollen by SmugCorporation, on Flickr
3.

Bull by SmugCorporation, on Flickr

zach · 6th May 2012, 7:01 PM

Thumbnails are broken mate, I like the PP on the stairs but.

random1283 · 6th May 2012, 7:08 PM

Yeah I just fixed them

kingbob86 · 6th May 2012, 7:10 PM

Stairs one is good, like the symmetry and how you've left room for the sky above.

kpra1 · 6th May 2012, 7:14 PM

Really like the feel of Pollen and Bull, nice touch with editing them. Looking forward to seeing more

Modafroman · 6th May 2012, 7:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zach

Thumbnails are broken mate, I like the PP on the stairs but.

Ditto, I like the pp on the stairs

random1283 · 9th May 2012, 4:33 PM

Hi guys,
thanks for the complements, The perspective on the stairs is why I personally like that photo myself

, Hopefully I'll go take some more pics and post them up here in the future.

rasice · 9th May 2012, 5:48 PM

All win photos in my book.

I really love the colours on Pollen. My favorite.

theSeekerr · 9th May 2012, 8:49 PM

Stairs are cool. If you're not above a hint of dishonesty in the name of art, it would be a little more powerful if you cloned out the signpost.

Love the processing style - the "nostalgic" faded look can be overdone, but these are subtle enough to work.

random1283 · 10th May 2012, 7:33 AM

Once again thanks guys, it took me quite awhile to process the shot to where I was happy with them, I'm glad other peopple appreciate not overprocessing the shots

6th May 2012, 6:57 PM	#1
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6th May 2012, 7:08 PM	#3
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kpra1 Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Sydney Posts: 213	Really like the feel of Pollen and Bull, nice touch with editing them. Looking forward to seeing more __________________ Redbubble flickr Last.FM

9th May 2012, 4:33 PM	#7
random1283 Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Brisbane Posts: 100	Hi guys, thanks for the complements, The perspective on the stairs is why I personally like that photo myself , Hopefully I'll go take some more pics and post them up here in the future. __________________ Good Trades; MrMagoo2, Noodle_Soup, kristanzanek, Megasaxon, mavric41, forgiven, g51, KurRuPtViSioNs, Kosti, Frag, Bern, Raincloudx, marthin, Joshzors, swong, Hexx, Courtenay, Nightbringer

6th May 2012, 7:01 PM	#2
zach Member Join Date: May 2009 Location: chermside.bris.qld.au:80 Posts: 2,571	Thumbnails are broken mate, I like the PP on the stairs but.

9th May 2012, 5:48 PM	#8
rasice Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 92	All win photos in my book. I really love the colours on Pollen. My favorite.

9th May 2012, 8:49 PM	#9
theSeekerr Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 878	Stairs are cool. If you're not above a hint of dishonesty in the name of art, it would be a little more powerful if you cloned out the signpost. Love the processing style - the "nostalgic" faded look can be overdone, but these are subtle enough to work. __________________ Lucis+Umbra Blog - Photography by c.j. kerr

10th May 2012, 7:33 AM	#10
random1283 Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Brisbane Posts: 100	Once again thanks guys, it took me quite awhile to process the shot to where I was happy with them, I'm glad other peopple appreciate not overprocessing the shots __________________ Good Trades; MrMagoo2, Noodle_Soup, kristanzanek, Megasaxon, mavric41, forgiven, g51, KurRuPtViSioNs, Kosti, Frag, Bern, Raincloudx, marthin, Joshzors, swong, Hexx, Courtenay, Nightbringer