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Old 6th February 2017, 5:32 PM   #1
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Old 8th February 2017, 7:33 PM   #2
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Stunning and gorgeous model. 6 and 8 are fantastic.....especially 6 which is a standout imo. Really accentuates her figure.
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Not addressing the model or the photography skill but why/who chose that dress/girl/location.

None of those three things fit. The dress or the girl don't really belong in that concrete environment. The tats on the girl don't work well with the dress either (IMO) .

Photographs are excellent however, the red dress in contrast to the background works well to focus attention, the short focus really works great in the last few images.
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Old 3rd April 2017, 3:44 PM   #4
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That's a fair point regarding location. As for the model, you have to be realistic, especially for test shoots. There aren't that many models that would fit that dress. It's actually quite a casual affair; I choose dress, model etc; my aim is to do as many shoots as possible.

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Old 5th April 2017, 3:15 PM   #5
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Not addressing the model or the photography skill but why/who chose that dress/girl/location.

None of those three things fit. The dress or the girl don't really belong in that concrete environment.
Not so sure about that, it could be an Adelaide casino environment outside.
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dont care about location - can be good to put things where they arent supposed to be for test/TFP type shoots.

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dont care about location - can be good to put things where they arent supposed to be for test/TFP type shoots.

Nice work!
Exactly, contrast.
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I think the locations and the dress could have worked, but I am more concerned about the expressions. She has not enough attitude to carry the location and dress combination off. With the exception of 6.

The ones with the building in the background, maybe try to do something to separate her from the background. A rim light or burn in the background more.

The tattoo honestly did not bother me. Until someone mentioned it, I hat seen it at all.
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I think the locations and the dress could have worked, but I am more concerned about the expressions.
Needs more mean attitude?
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Needs more mean attitude?
This is just my opinion, but she is neither 'Here I am and you are all beneath me, and I walk on clouds' or 'I am an angel floated down to earth and just happened to have landed here' enough. Mostly she is just a 'I am a model, here is a model pose and take my picture.'
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This is just my opinion, but she is neither 'Here I am and you are all beneath me, and I walk on clouds' or 'I am an angel floated down to earth and just happened to have landed here' enough. Mostly she is just a 'I am a model, here is a model pose and take my picture.'
Ok, heh, fair enough, that's very descriptive : )
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Ok, heh, fair enough, that's very descriptive : )
It is even better if you ever see me say that to a model in person... lol
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It is even better if you ever see me say that to a model in person... lol
Hmmm, I'm not sure I want to : p
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#7 & #8 for me.
Perspective nailed.
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