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Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Brisbane
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Doing a redesign for a friends firm. Their logo is pretty dated unfortunately. Constructive criticism/feedback very much welcome!
old: http://www.2ndavenuerealty.com.au/ new:
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Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: Adelaide
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definitely needs an update, i like how you incorporated the original signpost design for the new one, looks much more modern and IMHO catches your eye more.
i would say get rid of the old logo, it looks out of place there. great work though there would be much more chance of my using a company with the new site than the old
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Location: Brisbane
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Yea, may ditch the old logo, or at least change the opacity so it isn't so overbearing. Their colour scheme is completely off, that disgusting teal with the bright read. I compromised with blue and red and having the essence of the logo still preserved with the sign post up the top.
Looking forward to showing them. |
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Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: Darwin
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good job. your on the right path.
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Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Sydney
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Looks fine except that the text on the street signs is at the wrong angle on a few of them, and are the letters intentionally out of place?
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Lose the weird angle...
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Location: Melbourne
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Is it an optical illusion due to the angle, or are the signs sort of bent? The text doesn't seem to be completley straight either, and doesn't perfectly match the signs angle... It is sorta killing the whole design for me.
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Join Date: Mar 2007
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it looks like u scewed the images instead of creating text, then rotating?
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Of the street signs - the angle doesn't add anything to the design, only makes it awkward to look at.
The idea of using street signs is good though.
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Join Date: May 2007
Location: Sydney N.S.W
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Yeah the stree signs need to be re done, good idea just doesn't work at taht angle.
Also some of the text in the street signs isn't even straight?? I mean one letter is higher and the next letter is lower? Just look at the words contact us. Other than that smalls tuff good design man.
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Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: Brisbane
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Thanks for the feedback
Any better?Straight with no stretch? http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/9926/normc.jpg Straight with stretch? http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/8718/stretchu.jpg Last edited by GetSmart; 22nd September 2009 at 3:38 PM. |
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Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Sydney
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Looks better but the signs are still wavy and not straight
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