NSFW A Pinup

Discussion in 'The Gallery' started by Alessiman, Dec 29, 2012.

  1. Alessiman

    Alessiman Member

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    I had a quite heavily inked model pop in last week for a test

    Tried something different with the editing. People are either going to love it or hate it. I don't think there will be middle ground here

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  2. ^catalyst

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    Edit is good, pose... maybe not? seems a bit awkward.
     
  3. supernom

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    Agreed. the pose is weird
    her legs/feet look seriously weird
     
  4. Dropbear

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    yeh nicely lit ... dunno if some more separation from the wall would help - it seems like there's some colour drifting going on the 'dirty?' wall..

    model looks fabulous (technically lit etc) but the rest of the shot 'cheapens' what would otherwise be a pro shot
     
  5. anark1

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    the model looks ok but a bit to artificial with the editing.
    doesnt look right.
     
  6. MotoJohnno

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    I like the post on the skin but the pose from the waist down is no good. The angle makes her legs look very large.
     
  7. s4Rg3

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    Agree with the legs being awkward.

    With the PP, the dodging looks weird on her stomach? (mainly just her right side, above the tattoo) I'd also suggest maybe also keeping it the same on her face as her body and burn a bit more as well.


    chest up would be a great photo also
     
  8. Taceo Corpus

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    It looked good right up until I saw her legs. There is some seriously strange shit going on with her legs/feet in that pose. :wired: Foreshortening has not been kind to her.

    I like pretty much everything else about the shot though.
     
  9. kombiman

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    chin up rather than chin down is my only observation, chin up is more provocative which is what I think is trying to happen.
     
  10. sconosciuto

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    Pose is awkward.

    I don't know what you're trying to achieve with the editing, but it works for me.
     
  11. ya3

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    Lighting looks great. Ringflash?
     
  12. Zzapped

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    Agree with whats been said, the editing is good but her pose, just doesnt look right
     
  13. luke o

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    Well done, personally I like the eyes more in focus
     

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